Charon- Page 61

30th Mar 2015, 12:00 AM in Episode 1
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Charon- Page 61
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L. Cardenas 30th Mar 2015, 12:00 AM edit delete
New girl has a name, you know :/
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Magnificent Dandelion 30th Mar 2015, 12:06 AM edit delete reply
Magnificent Dandelion
You know, this Elena Preston person seems to be some kind of satire. Correct me if I'm wromg.
Iamabrawler 30th Mar 2015, 2:36 AM edit delete reply
Iamabrawler
Tell me the red-nosed one gets sent home. It was funny for a few pages, but she's slowly accumulating all the defects of a Scrappy.
L. Cardenas 30th Mar 2015, 9:13 PM edit delete reply
Slowly? You mean she's not a Scrappy yet? Damn, this'll be harder than I thought.

Jokes aside, I will admit to maybe having a bit too much fun while making this character's mannerisms unpleasant, but don't worry. When the introductions are all out of the way (which should be soon) and we start getting into the meat of the story, the characters should tone down as they get settled.

Thanks for the input though. It's always nice to hear of ways to improve the story.
Skweeee 31st Mar 2015, 6:08 PM edit delete reply
Skweeee
I have to say, that I really like the way that you render the textures in the backgrounds. This gives your comic a classy professional feel.